31 July 2013
Dear Greenpeace
I saw a snake behind the bookshelf. It was resting its body and I know about poisonous snakes. They can only see stuff that moves and they can eat stuff that is bigger that their head. They eat meat. I secretly got it a piece of meat. We like to slither on the ground and in the water.
Can you send me information on snakes.
From Charlie
I like your choice of the word 'resting' as it really helps put a picture in my mind. Also the word 'slither' gives me a really good image. Well done using precise words. Mrs W
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